Wednesday, 6 November 2013


Walt: Write a narrative
2. Use words to print a picture
3. Use senses

It was one beautiful night my mum,dad,cousin,sister and I were getting ready for fireworks to go to One Tree Hill. When we got all the fireworks ready and      we went to One Tree Hill and we were playing on the park.

When we burst our first fireworks it was loud. My dad gave  my sister and me two Guy Fawkes sticks to fire when my sister used up one of her fireworks nothing went wrong. Then she fired her other Guy Fawkes and she lost control of the stick and it hit the tree and the tree was on fire. Then my dad looked in his pocket and it wasn't in his pocket it was in his car.

Then he went in to the car and grabbed the phone and dialled 111. They  came in 30 minutes and  put the fire on the tree out.  My family went home. Then we went home mum said. We will never go to One Tree Hill for Guy Fawkes.


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