Wednesday, 21 August 2013

Edmund Hillary

Walt: use our research to write an essay on an inspirational person.

Edmund Hillary

Edmund Hillary was born on 20 July 1919.

Edmund Hillary made history by being the first one to climb Mount Everest and he never gave up. I am inspired by him because he used the most perseverance. He made history for him and his country.  Everyone understand him because he has a good sense of humor.
Edmund Hillary was a soldier in world war 2 and he fight for him and his country.Edmund Hillary was and stills is on the five dollar note. He was a honest man everyone has ever had.
I like Edmund Hillary because he is a
very good man. He built a lot of house for people that had no homes.  


Langaiva said...

Hi Kelvin I think that you have made a lot of mistakes in your writing.
Did you know which mountain did Edmund Hillary climb first?

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